I. The Central Strategies you will use to build your speeches will be:Supporting Materials Language Use Chapter 14 Advice
II. We viewed a speech from the appendix of the textbook and then analyzed it: Speech Analysis: Dying To Be Thin
- Specific Purpose: To inform my audience about the serious, potentially fatal disorder, anorexia.
- Central Idea: Anorexia is a serious disorder that has serious consequences for its victims, several major causes and several possible treatments.
A. StructureI. Anorexia is a serious disorder that has serious consequences for its victims.
B. Speech Development: Support Materials
II. Anorexia is a serious disorder that has several possible causes.
III. Anorexia is a serious disorder that has several possible treatments.1. Introduction
- strong specific example: Julie
- strong startling statistics: “one in every 100” and the New York Times says it is growing….
2. First Main Point- Definition: anorexia nervosa is a disorder of self-starvation.
- Maclean’s magazine lists 4 common characteristics
- Speech Development
- First Main Point
- Description: hair becomes brittle, etc.
- Sports Illustrated says… (paraphrase)
- example of Julie referred to again
3. Second main point (3 causes)- Newsweek notes society’s image obsession
- Dying to Please notes the personality causes.
- Doctors at the University of Pittsburgh School of Medicine have found a physiological cause.
- Julie example
4. Third Main Point (treatments)
- Dr. Katherine Halmi quote
- New York Times statistics on relapses
- Angie Melnyk quote (peer testimony)
5. Conclusion
B. The speech does some things to relating to the audience, but could do much more.- summary
- reference back to the Julie example
- personal credibility helps
- does strike men, but 44 percent of victims are college-females
- Use of the Julie example throughout since it personalizes the topic.
- Using questions for connectives may help some listeners.
C. Language Use and other ChoicesIII. Importance of Support Materials
- Avoids technical language
- Uses concrete language
excellent user-friendliness
Choosing good sources supports your credibility.
Vary sources.
Web pages (choose .org [ know sponsoring org], .edu, .gov)
Newspaper articels from Lexis-Nexis academic.
Books, magazines, articles
See esp. library on-line cataglogue and Expanded Academic Index.
Vary subject, keyword for searching.
Making good choices and citing them is important for success.
IV. Speaking clearly and effectively involves hard work and creativity.* Think, how can I best explain this to my audience to help them understand?V. Example of description of Bode Miller (alpine skiing world champion) in Newspaper.
* Don’t overestimate audience’s knowledge, but don’t underestimate their
intelligence.
* How can I connect with them by personalizing my topic?
* How can I incorporate my own experience?
* How can I clarify through smart choices of concrete, familiar terms, descriptive
words, and visual aids?
which talked about his "romantic relationship with danger," to emphasize the importance
of using concrete and descriptive words and phrases to make your subject vivid to your audience.
Here is an analysis of the "Sneezing Speech" that may help you in preparing your informative speech.VI. By looking closely at the SNEEZING SPEECH you used to build the preparation outline last week, we can see some of the choices you might want to imitate.
A. STRUCTURE OF THE BODY
B. SUPPORT MATERIALS
- I. Sneezing can be understood in terms of the superstitions surrounding it throughout history.
- II. Sneezing can be understood as the body's complex reaction to a number of stimuli from pollen to strong emotion.
- III. Sneezing can be understood as something that can be done safely and politely.
1. First Main Point, paragraphs 6-122. Second Main Point, paragraphs 13-17
- Extended Example: story of Xenophon from the Concise Dictionary of Ancient History--nice details
- Extended examples across cultures: Zulu, India, western culture, (South Pacific--brief). All from Encyclopedia of Occult Sciences, Superstitions, and Folklore.
- Also increased credibility with citation of info from Science magazine.
3. Third Main Point, paragraphs 18-19
- Stat. 104 miles an hour--no citation
- Examples based on the discussion in the New York Times.
- Example of June Clark--interesting, but no source cited.
- Information in paragraph 18 is not cited.
- Quote from Jane Brody in the New York Times.
D. LANGUAGE USE IN THE SNEEZING SPEECH 1. Introduction:2. First Main Point:
- "you," and "your"
- preview is clear but not overly blatant.
3. Second Main Point:
- Concrete details and interesting word choices help to bring the story to life.
- The strong word choices continue: "sneezing,” is called "the nose's most conspicuous function."
- The language also continues to try to relate to the audience: "If you were walking down the dusty streets of Karim Nagar."
- He avoids getting overly technical; where it borders on technical he does it for humorous effect as in "overly active equilibriating mechanism."
- Colorful word choice continues: "rampaging predators," and "banishing intruders."
- Again, he addresses the audience: "If a man lunged at you with a knife.”
February 7- Visual Aids
We watched a demonstration "speech" from the Red/Green Show, saw samples
of creative, but simple visual aid use in student speeches including a speech on
different types of contact lenses, saw examples of drawings, and saw a full-length
student speech to talk about use or lack of use of visual aids.
Don’t panic.I. Why use visual aids?
Many people in our audience are visual learners - they are used to having visual images
keep their interest based on over-exposure to advertising.
Visual aids Strengthen the clarity of a Speaker's Message.
Increase the interest of the audience.
Visual aids make it easier for listeners to retain the information.
Enhance speaker credibility.
Improve persuasiveness
Even help alleviate stage fright.
- SOME SUGGESTIONS FOR VISUAL AID CREATION AND USE.
- Do not let your visual aid substitute for the speech.
- Do not let your visual aid distract the audience from your speech.
- Never pass around a visual aid during a formal speaking engagement.
- Show it only while talking about it
- Use common sense (no fires, weapons, live animals, etc..)
Make sure whatever aid you use is large enough for all to see.
- Enlarge photocopies.
- Overheads should use large typeface 20 pt. and above
- Incorporate white space
- Aim for a professional look
- Use Colors for Variety and Emphasis (from Dr. Stephen Mason, psychologist)
- Red says “important, pay attention!
Yellow is optimistic and sunny – also gets attention (i.e. school buses).
Blue is quiet, tranquil, cooling.
Pink is calming, lowers tension and anger
(i.e. “pink slip”)
Murphy's Law: Things Happen!
- What do you do if your poster won’t stay up?
What do you do if your cards fall?
What do you do if your power point disk doesn’t work?
What if they start drilling, or the fire alarm goes off in the middle of your speech?
Take your time setting things back.
Ask for help if you need it.
Pause and take a deep breath – remember that your audience is with you!
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